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He lies like a grave,
with open, honest deceit.
Wandering in the cemetery, I know I must be brave.

In the darkness, the branches seem to wave,
but not with pleasure do they greet.
He lies like a grave.

I see nothing left to save,
but I won’t let my heart sink in defeat.
Wandering in the cemetery, I know I must be brave.

At the apex, night swallows the moon like a cave.
Thoughts are born and die on repeat.
He lies like a grave.

I see them sleeping below the hill and crave
the cessation of my heart’s beat.
He lies like a grave.
Wandering in the cemetery, I know I must be brave.
©2007-2009 ~OLoboCanta
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Submitted: March 30, 2007
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this is my really revised villanelle... the theme is basically the same, but i wrote it better.

hope you don't hate this one! :D

(C) mOi
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you are such a beautiful poet. How is it that you speak to me now at just the right time?

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i am not a pretty girl. that is not what i do. i ain't no damsel in distress, and i don't need to be rescued, so put me down punk. wouldn't you prefer a maiden fair? isn't there a kitten stuck up a tree somewhere? Ani DiFranco
man... this rocks.
you rock.
I definitely don't don't don't don't don't don't don't don't don't hate it. :P

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Current novel-in-progress.
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thank you
villanelles are fun :P
i have no idea! it's just cosmic forces, i guess.
wow, thanks for commenting on both my villanelles! :blushes: it means a lot to me. :) :heart:
I like it.

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We all are our own Devil. We make this world our Hell.-Oscar Wilde by Company of Thieves

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